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sooooo...i made it... i tried to make a whole new creepypasta oc. i watched every single tutorial and clichee vid, i did loots of research (mostly because of the rape subject) and i even asked my mom (because she was touched by her father too. she broke up the contact to him...) , i spend hours of thinking about a weapon and this came out...
i really, really hope you like it and I'm more than open for any kind or criticism!
and i also really hope i treated the subject "rape" respectfully enough...i really tried it.
oh and if you are interested: here are a few concept drawings of her...
Full Name: Lucy Jones
Meaning of name: Light
Nickname(s): Lucky , Lissy, Lis
Creepypasta Name: Sad Lucy
How Did They Get This Name and Why: Since she was raped by her father (i will later get deeper into that...) she went into a deep depression and never really smiled since then.
Gender: female
Age: 17
Date of Birth: 2.12.
Place of Birth: Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
Race/Species: Human
Native language: Amerikan English
Languages spoken: German (she learned it at school)
Orientation/Sexual Preference: Homosexual
Zodiac Sign: Sagittarius
Religion: atheist
Occupation (before becoming a Pasta): Student
Are They Dead: no
If Yes, How’d They Die: /
Date of Death: /
Place of Death: /
Blood type: B
Mental Disorder: Posttraumatic Stress Disorder and depression
Phobia(s): Haphephobia, the fear of being touched
Allergies: none
Habits: she never skips breakfast
Powers/Special Abilities: none really
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 75kg
Hair color: dark blonde/light brown
Hairstyle: bobby cut
Eye color: it was blue
Piercings: none
Tattoos: none
Scars/Weird Marking(s): lots of bruises
Weapon(s): a carving fork
Streghts:
- very strong for her age
- good in fighting
- good in sneaking
- good in hiding
Weaknesses:
- is blind so she often misses her hits
- easy to kill since she is just a human
- after some of her victim's bodies were found she was haunted by the police
Other: she can barely sense if someone is a rapist or not. ("if something like rape happened to you, you can somehow sense if a special person tends to something like this too..." (from my mom))
Story:
Lucy was a happy kid until she was 12. After her 12th birthday she was touched by her father for the first time, because his wife was very dominant and he didn't appreciated it that much, so he decided to rape his daughters because he wanted to feed his issues of control , intimidation and mastery. Every month both girls were raped by him and he forbid them to tell anything to her mother, friends and school or "he wont be so gently next time". Because of this both girls started to grow lots of mental disorders. Lucys older sister got eating disorders and went like her younger sister into a deep depression.
At Lucy's 17th birthday, when her father tried to rape her sister again, she took the nearest weapon (a carving fork) and killed her father with it.
After that event her sister fleed out of the country while lucy stayed and decided to stab her eyes out, so she will never have to see things like this again. She later regret her desicion.
Meanwhile her mom discovered her dead husband and called the police. Lucy took her nearest backpack, put a few things into it, took her carving fork with her and ran away. She then decided to search for rapists to kill them, so no other girls have to experience those things she had to life with.
Friends/ Rivals:
Girlfriend:
Other friends:
Someone intrested?
Sad Lucy belongs to me.
i really, really hope you like it and I'm more than open for any kind or criticism!
and i also really hope i treated the subject "rape" respectfully enough...i really tried it.
oh and if you are interested: here are a few concept drawings of her...
~BASIC INFO~
Full Name: Lucy Jones
Meaning of name: Light
Nickname(s): Lucky , Lissy, Lis
Creepypasta Name: Sad Lucy
How Did They Get This Name and Why: Since she was raped by her father (i will later get deeper into that...) she went into a deep depression and never really smiled since then.
Gender: female
Age: 17
Date of Birth: 2.12.
Place of Birth: Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
Race/Species: Human
Native language: Amerikan English
Languages spoken: German (she learned it at school)
Orientation/Sexual Preference: Homosexual
Zodiac Sign: Sagittarius
Religion: atheist
Occupation (before becoming a Pasta): Student
Are They Dead: no
If Yes, How’d They Die: /
Date of Death: /
Place of Death: /
~MEDICAL INFO~
Blood type: B
Mental Disorder: Posttraumatic Stress Disorder and depression
Phobia(s): Haphephobia, the fear of being touched
Allergies: none
Habits: she never skips breakfast
Powers/Special Abilities: none really
~APPEARANCE~
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 75kg
Hair color: dark blonde/light brown
Hairstyle: bobby cut
Eye color: it was blue
Piercings: none
Tattoos: none
Scars/Weird Marking(s): lots of bruises
Weapon(s): a carving fork
Streghts:
- very strong for her age
- good in fighting
- good in sneaking
- good in hiding
Weaknesses:
- is blind so she often misses her hits
- easy to kill since she is just a human
- after some of her victim's bodies were found she was haunted by the police
Other: she can barely sense if someone is a rapist or not. ("if something like rape happened to you, you can somehow sense if a special person tends to something like this too..." (from my mom))
Story:
Lucy was a happy kid until she was 12. After her 12th birthday she was touched by her father for the first time, because his wife was very dominant and he didn't appreciated it that much, so he decided to rape his daughters because he wanted to feed his issues of control , intimidation and mastery. Every month both girls were raped by him and he forbid them to tell anything to her mother, friends and school or "he wont be so gently next time". Because of this both girls started to grow lots of mental disorders. Lucys older sister got eating disorders and went like her younger sister into a deep depression.
At Lucy's 17th birthday, when her father tried to rape her sister again, she took the nearest weapon (a carving fork) and killed her father with it.
After that event her sister fleed out of the country while lucy stayed and decided to stab her eyes out, so she will never have to see things like this again. She later regret her desicion.
Meanwhile her mom discovered her dead husband and called the police. Lucy took her nearest backpack, put a few things into it, took her carving fork with her and ran away. She then decided to search for rapists to kill them, so no other girls have to experience those things she had to life with.
Friends/ Rivals:
Girlfriend:
Other friends:
Someone intrested?
Sad Lucy belongs to me.
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Sad Lucy is quite an original character and definitely one of the better CreepyPasta OCS I've seen.
There aren't at all any sue-ish traits about her and you gave her flaws and mentioned her weaknesses which aren't usually done by other people, and her backstory made me pity her.
The name "Sad Lucy" isn't really an eye catching name but then again other simple names like "Jeff The Killer" and "BEN Drowned" are other simple but very known names so she's also a passable CreepyPasta (name wise) that should get more attention.
Her design is also very simple but the "dark eyes" is usually overused, her weapon is something unique too though. And I'll let the "dark eyes" slide since she doesn't have eyes in the first place!
I really like and appreciate this character, she has some flaws which is actually great! I hope she can get noticed more often too
There aren't at all any sue-ish traits about her and you gave her flaws and mentioned her weaknesses which aren't usually done by other people, and her backstory made me pity her.
The name "Sad Lucy" isn't really an eye catching name but then again other simple names like "Jeff The Killer" and "BEN Drowned" are other simple but very known names so she's also a passable CreepyPasta (name wise) that should get more attention.
Her design is also very simple but the "dark eyes" is usually overused, her weapon is something unique too though. And I'll let the "dark eyes" slide since she doesn't have eyes in the first place!
I really like and appreciate this character, she has some flaws which is actually great! I hope she can get noticed more often too